Saturday, May 26, 2007

Slang (s-secret, lang-language)

I use slang mostly with my friends and family, while at home or in town. I also use it in school, but rarely. I use slang in common situations, while commenting on something, joking, talking about something that is niđe veze ( nigdje veze-correct).
Why do I use it? I use it because, sometimes it is easier to speak in slang (you don't have to think about right grammatical forms, word order, or vocabulary, you can just use it without any rules). I use it because it can also be funny, interesting, and it can distract one's attention (for example, if you are reading some philosophical article and you are board, and then suddenly you see slang you will probably be surprised, awakened and more interested in reading the rest of the article. I use it because my personal slang "separates", "isolates" me from my company, society and lets my personality be recognizable through something that is unique only to it.
According to the definitions we heard from the BBC's "Learning English" radio programme, Talking About English, episode Part One of "Politics, Language, and Slang", slang is non-standard, very informal language, using non-standard word which has standard word. I agree with these definitions, but I will also add that slang for me represents street language, language of a specific type of music, language of experimenting with the language itself.
Slang comes from people's desire to shorten the words, make them less formal, easier to communicate, not so strict and grammatically correct. It is usually spoken, and it has its tradition, like Cockney for example. Cockney is a traditional slang, a "secret language" used by people which worked in the market for customers not to understand them.

In my opinion using slang can be good, but it can also be unsuitable, e.g. if you're a politician, and you're using slang, people certainly won't take you seriously enough, they will start laughing at you, or even worse, they won't consider you educated enough to perform the function of the politician (represent them, their name, culture, and country in the world).
Also the bad side of slang is that not everyone understands it. If you are using slang while speaking to an older person you could get misunderstood. Most of the older generation doesn't understand slang that younger generations use, e.g. if you say to your grandfather Come, and hang out with us, he will probably think you're hanging on something, a tree, or something similar. Simply he won't understand you. That is why we have to be careful when using slang, we need to be aware that not everyone knows what we are speaking about.

Everyone uses slang: politicians, lawyers, teachers, musicians, actors and actresses, farmers, TV hosts... It's present everywhere, in every profession, and in every part of society. Some use it more, some less depending of their own acquaintance to it, of the social circles in which they move, of the age structure, and their desire to use it. It is widely spread, and it is a popular form of communication that is becoming more frequent every day.

A letter to Mr.Callum Robertson/Group work

Dear Mr.Robertson,
We are students from the Mostar University «Džemal Bijedić», and being students of English language and literature we had the opportunity to hear your radio debate in our class. The show we listened to, was about the English language, where teachers and students were discussing of its use. After hearing your show, we also discussed about the opinions of your guests like you did.

The show showed things or situations where English language is used, which we would never pay attention to. Like the sentence we see in stores:
«10 items or less» (10items or fewer is grammatically correct)
This less, instead of fewer has become widely accepted and so frequent that most people don't see the mistake in this structure. If you asked some people, natives wouldn't see the mistake, they wouldn't even know the difference between less or fewer. Non-native speakers would accept this less as a correct form, because they don't expect that a public sign is written incorrectly. So how come that native speakers can use the incorrect form, and no one pays attention to it, but non-native speakers are being corrected? It's an offense. Native speakers have all the freedom they want in using English, but we can just use the correct form. But, we have seen that this isn't the best way, natives should use the correct form, because of the misunderstanding that can appear:
The fewer people know about this (affair), the better.
The less people know about this (affair), the better.

Another point we discussed, is that teachers should teach the correct form so it wouldn't come to misunderstandings. We can see the importance of using grammatically correct forms in essays, where students have to write correctly, if they don't want to be constantly corrected.
Especially in written language the use of correct forms is important. It would be, lets say strange, if we sent a letter to a high-profile person using non-correct forms, that person would think we were illiterate.

We also concluded that the balance of fluency and accuracy is the best. A good speaker should possess both. But as non-native speakers we would give more importance to accuracy, because we first learn to speak correct structures, and the fluency comes afterwards, through conversations. We can’t have these conversations, if we don’t know the grammar, or the word order in a sentence.

Your show has been very successful and useful for us, non-natives, because you have talked about many important themes in language that we haven't mentioned in this letter. We wish you success in your further work, and that you continue with this kind of subjects. Thank you for giving us your time

Sincerely yours, English language and literature students from Mostar

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Experimental phase

Passing through an experimental phase means, as the word itself says, experimenting, trying new things, exploring, changing, wanting something new and different, making your life a hocus pocus, a magic world that is only yours and that no one else can touch, enter, or vitiate.

The thing about experimenting is wanting to be someone else, wanting to try your luck in other shoes, to be equal to your friends, to escape from all that surrounds you, and try to form your own world in which you are your own boss and an independent person. That, usually means become a rebellion.

People, in most cases, pass through this phase as teenagers (from 14-17/18), but I think there is no age limit for experimenting. Phases just happen. They come and go. Every part of life is a new phase; some effect us more some less, some you feel some you don't. Life, itself, is experimenting, trying, sometimes exceeding and sometimes failing.

I can't say I have passed through an experimental phase. Maybe I have, but I didn't feel it, or notice it. All I know is that I was always a good, quiet child, very calm especially at school, never escaping classes, drinking or smoking. I lived and I am living as the social codex says. I was always different from my classmates and never a rebellion.

Maybe this is my experimental phase; being different and doing things differently from others. I don't know. I know that I enjoy being the person I am, and that I don't want to change.

I can say I'm completely different from Chaim or Curly Oxide, but I can understand him.
I can understand him because every person has something that is just his/hers and no one else's. He had his experimental phase, which changed his life, and gave him an opportunity to really know his inner-self, and to see what he wants to be in further life.
This phase may changed "natural" flow of his life, but it also gave him a chance to choose a path, a direction in which he wants to go through life.

Experimental phase comes and goes; it enters into every one's life, although not necessarily, changes, disturbs it, makes a mess, and then without knowing disappears. It plays, experiments with us, gives our parents headaches, makes us rebellious, but all in purpose of a goal, a goal that can be like in Chaim's case: knowing yourself better and choosing the right direction, direction that will lead us into a new life phase and make us experiment once more.

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Explanation/Group work (Sanja M,Edna,Dženana)

In this mode, the writer wants to describe, define, or classify a subject. Exploration often opens a subject, while explanation helps to clarify and describe it so the reader can better understand it.

The assignment of our group was to "Explain a Marketing Strategy"

1.First question: Study the two clothing advertisements for Guess and Diesel? On a piece of paper make a list of details that describe each ad. What do you see? Be specific, but also be factual. Only list what you see.

Guess: We see two people, man and a woman, dancing somewhere that looks like a supermarket, girl is looking towards us and smiling, while the guy is turned to the other side. They are both wearing jeans and they both have belts on their jeans.

Diesel: In the other ad we also see two people, again man and a woman dancing somewhere that looks like a a court room, or an office. They are also wearing jeans. On guys jeans we can clearly see etiquette (label) of the producer. In the same room there is a table with a computer on it, and on the wall there is a prepared head of a reindeer. In the middle of the ad there is newspapers called The Daily African with a banner headline:"European developing countries targeted by African tobacco industry".
2.Second question: Based on your list of details, what is the story the ad is trying to tell its intended audience? Do you think the "story" is successful for selling clothes? Why or why not?
We think that the story that both ads are trying to tell to its audience is: "Wear jeans, jeans looks good on everyone".
Yes, we think that the story is successful for selling clothes because in it you can see two young, beautiful, romantic couples that look really good in what they ware, in jeans. Most of the people, when they see this ad, will think: "If they look so good in jeans, probably I will look good in it too, or maybe even better. Maybe this jeans will make me look like J.Lo".
3.Third question: Compare the two ads and decide which is more effective and why.
For us more effective is the Guess's ad. Why? Three reasons:
-Picture is more focused on models and what they are wearing, than on their surrounding ( not like in Diesels ad where too many details distract our attention from what we should be really looking at).
-Picture is better although is black and white and we can see more clearly models of jeans.
-Man and woman from Guess's ad look better in jeans than those from Diesel's ad.
















Sunday, March 18, 2007

My Picture/Photo

When I look at this this photo, I think about prom night, about that whole day, about all the people which came to see us, graduates, I think about how cold it was and how nervous I was.
A story that this picture prompts me to remember is my prom night, and that story goes like this.

The beginning of the prom night was at 8.00 o'clock. We, the students had to gather at 7.30 on Musala, a square in the centre of Mostar. When I came there, there were many people, many other students that were celebrating the end of high school. Everyone was dressed really nice: girls were wearing dresses and boys suits. Weather was at first warm but then it got windy. My first impression when I got out of the car was: "Oh, My God how much people". I was very nervous, especially because we had to walk in a row with our partner between the crowd. I had a feeling that the crowd was watching our every move so I had to be very careful, especially with the dress because of the wind.

When we came to the hotel the first thing we had to was to take a photo alone and with our partner. When my turn came to take a picture I was terrified, nervous and confused. In front of me stood a photographer and behind him a long row of other students waiting to be photographed. In that moment I felt like I wasn't there, more accurately, like my body was there but my thoughts were somewhere else.

When that part with the photos ended I was relieved. I went to the hotel and waited for the party to begin. As the night passed we had nice time dancing, joking, smiling, simply enjoying our last high school days.

  • For me, things that have changed are:
I'm now on faculty, next to old I also have some new friends, there are no more those people from high school that are always teasing you, now I have some new teachers, better ones and also one thing that has changed is that I don't have a pet anymore.

  • Things that I know now, that I didn't know when this photo was taken are: there are many cruel people in the world which bother if you are happy, which are jealous on you and your life, there are people that are not like your parents (wanting you only the best). But also there are those which are good, which want you all the luck of the world, which would share the last bite of bread with you. I know now that you should enjoy and smile every day and not let anyone hurt you, I know that I have every right to express my opinion as anyone else in the class, I know that after rain always comes Sun and I also know what quintessential and exuberant mean.

  • What does this picture say about me that I didn't expect?

It says that I can look nice in a dress.

















Response to Anne Lamott's essay

Here I am sitting in my room thinking how to respond to this theme. Thousand thoughts cross my mind: what to write first, how to write an introduction and everything else that comes after it, how to put my thoughts and emotions on a piece of paper.
These thoughts are confronting each other. One is saying write this, the other is saying write that. There is a mess in my head. I'm trying to make a pact between these two currents of whom each is pulling on it's side, I'm trying to take a part of each and make them work as one.
It seems that this plan of mine, plan of reconciliation of two confronted sides is working after all because I can feel that there is some structure forming in my head. I'm slowly putting this structure, my united thoughts, my emotions on a piece of paper. I'm writing the first sentence then another and another and so on.
Suddenly I realize that this way of writing isn't the way I would like to use, that I'm not on the wright track, that I'm not writing about the thing I would really like to write about, about that, that is in my imagination, but I also realize that without these previously three written pages I wouldn't come to something, as Anne says "...that is so beautiful or wild that you now know what you're supposed to be writing about, more or less, or in what direction you might go..."
With this new idea on my mind, new gained experience, direction I'm starting to write again, to write in a direction in which my imagination leads me and for which I'm sure is the right one.